Jun
10
Filed Under (04. ACROSTIC, Crystal, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 10-06-2008

CLOSED MINDED INDIVIDUAL YOU TELL ME THAT I AM

ROUGH AROUND THE EGES BUT SO SMOOTH WHEN YOU TOUCH

YES I HAVE AN ATTITUDE SOMETIMES! DON’T WE ALL!

SILLY I CAN’T BE

TAKE ME AS I AM

ANOTHER DAY GO BY AND YOU STILL HATE ME 

LISTEN TO YOU WHY SHOULD I SURPASSES MY ENIMES 

Jun
02
Filed Under (12. CHANT, Clarissa, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 02-06-2008

i have a dream that one day ill have the courage to say

i dont wanna be with you, i got better things to do

i have a dream that one day

i wont look like a fool

when i say i dont wanna go to school

i’ll do what i wanna do

i have a dream that one day

ill overcome my challenges

and be aware of my advantages

and realize what being happy is.

May
12
Filed Under (07. CONSONANCE, ALLITERATION & ASSONANCE, Bianca, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 12-05-2008
i walked into the corner store
suddenly my NOSE FROZE
his eyes made me SHY
his hair wasn’t fair
ANONYMOUS was the sweetest thing i ever saw.
the non-eye contact
instantly drove me off track.
a LITTLE boy yelled DADDY
then he got in his caddy
i ran in the corner store to CRY
BUT ALL I COULD DO WAS SIGH
May
08

Filed Under (06. IMAGERY, Quincy, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 08-05-2008

Recipe to make the world better.

To make humanity more unified

and the world a better place

all you need is one pure heart,

two hands to comfort,

two feet to walk in righteousness,

two eyes to invision a place of harmony,

then mix your mind and imagination

to taste that harmony.

Last but not least, you need to turn up the heat

on your conscience

to burn all thoughts of harming anybody.

-Quincy Truman

When i really analyzed life

It became clear to me that life is a journey.

Life is not about anmosity, ignorancy, or neglegence.

Contrary to beliefs,

life is about diligency, unity, and equality.

You shouldn’t live life trying to rule the domainion,

instead you should be trying

to show companion.

Love relates to many aspects of life

but when it’s not unconditional

the inverse of the word

reveals the evils of life.

Some people hate their lives

because they love their souls.

What you reep is what you sow

So, consume good thoughts and hapiness will grow.

May
06
Filed Under (01. I AM, Dinasia, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 06-05-2008

I am sassy yet generous

I wonder if i’ll marry an undercover bigamist

I hear the sound of determination

I see the views of the goals i’m chasing

I want he who reads to be digging this

I am sassy yet generous

I pretend that I am not a bit much

I feel at times the softness of my Angel’s tender touch

I touch the springs perfect breeze

I worry that civilization will soon come to a freeze

I cry for those who i’ve lost unexpectedly

I am sassy yet generous

I understand for what you want you must work

I say for what you desire you should never lurk

I dream and hope one day it becomes reality

I try to escape the demons of life but sometimes they just follow me

I hope for he who reads to had been digging this

I am sassy yet generous

Apr
18
Filed Under (15. YOUR CHOICE, Kimmbley, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 18-04-2008

I hate that I love you, but I’m leaving tonight. Please don’t go, I love you. Liar. I’m sorry. Truthfully it’s too late to apologize. We’ve come to the end of the road.

Listen,

How do I say,

Sorry,

And there’s a stranger in my house,

Hold on,

What happened to that girl,

Your summer love,

Next to you,

Day and night,

When I was gone,

No one,

Or someone that you’re with,

Aint no way,

I’m your substitute lover,

I gave my heart to you,

Just me and you,

Time after time,

I questioned,

Being with you,

Wait a minute,

Didn’t I tell you,

I wanna be,

Free,

Far away,

Gone,

All because of you,

I’m all cried out,

Tell me what you want me to do,

Stay,

Work it out,

Start all over,

Never,

You’re a heartbreaker

There’s no let’s stay together,

Putting that on everything,

Heart to heart,

I will always love you,

But it’s over now,

And I’m so over you.

Mar
24
Filed Under (Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 24-03-2008

To make humanity more unified.

And the world a better place.

All you need is one pure heart.

Two hands to comfort, two foot to walk in righteouness.

Two eyes to invision a place of harmony.

Then mix your mind and imagination to taste that harmony.

Last but not least you need to turn up the heat on your conscience to burn,

All thought of harming someone.

Mar
17
Filed Under (05. RECIPE, Arthur, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 17-03-2008

two cups of being a real person

five teaspoons of humor

six spoonful of good education

whole lot of support from a loving family and friends

and their will be money and framily

Feb
06
Filed Under (Ms. Fontaine, Uncategorized) by PoetrySpace on 06-02-2008

This virtual space is an extension of our physical classroom. It will allow us to share our work with each other. Let’s work together to make Poetry Space a success!
First things first. Some ground rules.

  • Class members are the only authorized users of this website.
  • Treat other members with respect. Focus on the positive when commenting on other people’s poems.
  • Take this online forum seriously. Your TIMELY, ACTIVE & THOUGHTFUL participation is worth 50% of your final grade.
  • You cannot pass this course if you do not fulfill these requirements.
  • No profanity or explicit language. If you are unsure about whether or not you can post something, see me.

Let’s get going!