Mar
26

MY #1 DAUGHTER

Filed Under (03. EPISTLE (Response), Clarissa) by PoetrySpace on 26-03-2008

dear cee-cee

i’m sorry about how our relationship is

i don’t know where i went wrong with you

maybe i was too hard on you? maybe i expected too much from you?

but thats only because I KNOW WHAT YOUR CAPABLE OF

your my oldest daughter

and you always dissapoint me

I DONT KNOW why you do the things that you do

you say you love me but thats something i just dont see

sometimes i feel you do things purposely to hurt me

why dont you see how smart you are and apply yourself to the fullest?

theres so much in life that i want you to see

DONT BE LIKE ME!!!!! i want MORE for you

i want us to work things out

we should be bestfriends

im ALWAYS going to be here for you when you need me …….

AND IM ALWAYS GOING TO FORGIVE YOU
I LOVE YOU!!!!

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clarissapoet on 9 April, 2008 at 9:16 am #
    

this is very deep but yet real


Ms Fontaine on 1 May, 2008 at 11:02 pm #
    

hmmm.. intriguing…

But who wrote this poem?? You have to put your name on your work!

But as far as the content goes, I felt that the sentiment of feeling sad and guilty for how you have (or believe you have) disappointed an important person in your life is a UNIVERSAL experience. Don’t feel too bad, whoever this is(!!!) . . .


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